Which of the following changes should she make during the revising stage?
A. Fixing grammar and adding facts to her paragraphs.
B. Fixing punctuation and adding examples to her paragraphs.
C. Adding details to her graphic organizer and sharing it with a partner.
D. Adding details to her paragraphs and including specific language.
the first one is, from what i was taught, more for editting. so i'd suggest going with d, as usually writers revise rough drafts by adding more text evidence, better vocabulary, ect. making it flow better.
