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  • 18-11-2021
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Hi! I have an essay that I want to be proofread and if you could let me know what to change, it would help. Thank you!

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  • 18-11-2021

The essay is really good but maybe for the last sentence you can put 'in conclusion we should defund the police departments because of the overall statistics of the injustice"

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