AmberBCPAstudent
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  • 22-03-2022
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I need someone to check my grammar on my poem please
A dark place

say goodbye
tear stained, blood stained
you once promised me infinity
a dying rose on the table, a silver heart
not but a tear
not but a gift

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CharlieTheChamp
CharlieTheChamp CharlieTheChamp
  • 22-03-2022

Answer:

Seems pretty good.

Maybe instead of "tear stained, blood stained" you do

tear stained; blood stained

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